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  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Part 1 of: the escape

    Almost every sentence is passive. Passive sentences make for a boring read. Fix them, it shouldn't be hard.

    Sep 21, 2006


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price